by LadyKaren50
Your style is very easy to read. Story line is fantastic. Moline illinois here. Would enjoy chatting with you. Steve
My compliments on a very well written story. Did I mention it left me very hard? XD
Your academic background facilitated a high quality of erotic writing. You are obviously capable of more descriptive scenes of sexual arousal and culmination, and the use of more profane dialogues, which even well-educated people use in the throes of sex. I am now a fan waiting for your ventures into personal experiences. From a senior male who has read a lot of erotica.
This was a fabulous story. It’s the first one of yours that I’ve read. Very well written and very sexual, it made me hot and horny, very horny, stroking the whole time I was reading. I hope I can connect with your ladyKaren. I’ll send you a separate message from your bio page. You’re an amazing writer with a gift for eroticism. Dan
Fantastic story Reminds me of what happened to Marilyn in Behind the Green Door. Hope you will add more chapters to describe more about your adventures there.
I loved this story - extremely erotic and made me very excited. Superior writing skills really enhanced the intense feelings I felt while reading and stimulated me in a fun way. Thank you for writing it.