All Comments on 'Stolen Away'
by ruwild
- 27 Comments
I hope there is more when her friend arrives. Also, thanks for the tip on Anasheya. Beautiful artwork!
Wish i was in jessy's place. Nothing as hot as being claimed a hot hung dominate black shemale.
One did me in a bar (that had drag shows, the Rose Room) . Between shows, a 6'2 Black Domme took me into the ladies room and did me in a stall. When he was done she just left me there, naked. When i got dressed, as i opened the stall door, all the "ladies" in the room applauded. i was so embarrassed and felt so wonderfully abused.
Thank you for yet another great story. Well written and so very exciting. Hope we get to hear what is in store for Jessy. Tanya seems to have quite a bit in store for the lad.
You smacked the wrong person, Anna. I'd have knocked that bitch Tanya out!
Hot, hot, hot story and great writing too! I'm sure Anasheya will approve
Great story, thank you so much for writing it and posting it. I agree that it would be great to read a chapter about the ride home and then another about Jessy adjusting to his new life with Tanya.
I'm going to check your other works but it will be pretty difficult to top this. This is the ultimate fantasy of any guy that has ever thought about what it would be like to be with a girl like Tanya.
Once again you've written an amazing story that I hope you'll continue with the friend that Jessy hasn't met yet. This could be a nice 3 or 4 part series if you choose to write it. We can all only hope that you will.
You really, really understand the mind of a submissive. The theme and the imagery would have been enough to turn me on by itself, but the parts about Jessy finding the desire to be wanted and used really put this story over the top. This story really encapsulates the major difference between being controlled and being dominated. Control is actually far more sadistic in the end. The part at the beginning about Anna not allowing Jessy to cum more than twice in the several months of their relationship made me cringe. That kind of control is just one-sided and cruel. What she and Jessy had was not a real relationship. Anna was the only one getting off, at the expense of Jessy's dignity and needs, and she made him beg to even be allowed to touch her. Intimacy just can not be cultivated in vacuum like that. Jessy deserved better, and I for one, am sure that he got it in the end. (pardon the pun)
like this are a small guy with a bigger girl... would love to see a chick like this try something with a 6'1-6'3 190-245lb guy.... she'd be knocked up side the head or worse, the bitch'd be in the hospital. I can appreciate the eroticism your trying to display and the whole story. I know this seems like an attack on you for all these kinds of stories but after reading a dozen of them, the same setup just gets so tiring. and Maybe you could try to find a different character type to function in the same genre
ignore deepak , there isn't enough of these stories in literotica, keep them coming.
love this story, my favourite domination story ever. Unfortunately can't seem to find others quite like this one
I couldn't finish reading the story because of how rapey it is. I understand than some people like non-consent stories, but a word of warning at the beginning of the story would have been appreciated.
Still one of the greatest stories on here, came back to read it for the nth time after the years. I'm still waiting on that manga of this or I haven't found it
Great story. I love the way Tanya seems to understand Jessy and his needs better than he does. And I love how she's willing to tear a relationship apart to get what she wants, she comes across as a woman who is a real bitch and likes being one. In the end, he's going to be happier.
After reading this is something I have dreamed about having this happen to me what a great read
I love Anasheya's drawings! I hope she uses this story for her drawings. It was a good story. I hope you write more of them both. Maybe the trip home, and afterwards.
He story was a turn on mostly, but I’m not sure if I could be that submissive. I do like trans girls just not submissive.
wish there was a part two where we met her friend and they tag teamed him