All Comments on 'Submitting to Dominance Ch. 01'

Incredibly hot story, cant wait for more

Not gonna lie, I didn't expect much from a story without sex, but goddamn if that isn't one of the best set-ups I've seen for a series. Very excited to see you continue this story - best of luck in your writing.

Loved it, please follow up with a 2nd chapter

I loved it! I look forward to the next chapter!

Overall I liked the concept of the story and I’m all about how Perry submitted to a superior man. And I’m glad the author put advance notice that there would be no sex in this chapter. I also loved his search for panties and the store adventure with Julie.

There was way too much detail on the basketball games and not enough in key places. Like when Perry had to model.. it seemed rushed. And have an editor check it over.

Great start !

I can feel Jamal's cock sliding in me right now. So good.