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by Texican1830
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Is this a prequel to morphed or have they been posted out of order...anyway not bad. Thanks
Missing dialogue quotations made reading difficult. If his nickname is "BAM", try writing that in name format: Bam. Otherwise, it reads like onomatopoeia rather than a name. It's an interesting story, but sometimes it bogged and got a little confusing. Also, the "five years" without any context to how old the children are gives us no idea how young they were when his wife cheated. If they were five or six at the time, the five years plus the year or so to get a divorce, should have these kids close to middle-school age. Confusing and close to being a continuity error. 3/5
Guys, once again - the story continues in Teacher Conference Morphed…which they published before Teacher Conference. But it’s listed if you scroll down a ways.
Legio - the daughter is a fourth grader, son is in first grade.; not sure where 5 years ago came in; her cheating was recent. BAM stands for Bad Ass Mother, as is disclosed at length. Like LEO, it’s an acronym.
Pretty good chapter once. I appreciate the ass whupping and the final bit of gunplay. A little bit over the top, but entertaining.
Simply Grand. Entertaining story with your usual twist and turns. Would have been nice to follow the action with Jana as the coach seduced her then pimped her out and with the One Who Will Not Be Named too. More detail into how Jill handled it as well. Maybe a spinoff from Coach Long's POV. BAMF's righteous vengeance a furious anger could have been delayed till after Kylie got the experience of three more lovers. But still a great story, consequences are often overlooked.
Isn't he going from one married cheating slut to another? Divorce is effective at midnight but she admits she has been fucking other men and women? You have made Kylie a pretty unsympathetic character IMO.
4 different men so cuck husband should have shared her trysts online and put up posters of the fuckers!!
idk, this paragraph invalidates the whole tale:
"Of course, she wept bitterly in front of the woman judge, Karen Thomas, claimed I abused her and the kids both mentally and physically. She offered not a shred of evidence, much less proof, but she still got custody of the kids, the house, and a healthy 'maintenance' allocation for five years. She accomplished those things without producing a shred of evidence because those things never happened, and she couldn't even get someone to lie for her! Yet, the Judge nodded sagely, gave me a nasty look, and hten fucked me over! Justice at its finest!"
Just doesn't happen...
When this is the buttress for the tale, you know, a) no real character development b) the plot is boilerplate.