All Comments on 'Teaching Eden Ch. 01: The School'

As someone with an advance preview of what's coming, I can say it's shaping up to be a fun series.

And of course I'm more than willing to help you explore exhibitionism.

(In stories, people. Get your mind out of the gutter. 😉 )

- thanks as always, hun 😊. Em

Exhibitionist stories appeal to my voyeuristic side, look forward to this series. Don't mind the ladies having fun either ;)

- there will be plenty of both as it progresses. Currently plan six chapters. Em

I fell into the wrong profession! A private school teacher has her own house and immediately attracts the right kind of neighbors without inhibitions. Why did I find this all so plausible - silly me - because of the excellent writing style and the fact that it just might - could have been - possible, I suppose. But I'm going for the good writing. Everyone else is, right?

My voyeuristic side has been piqued. I have to wonder as these ladies begin to indulge themselves will someone like the principle be out for a stroll?

Looking forward to chapter two.

- willing suspension of disbelief 🫢

- you might like Chapter Four 😘

Instrumental solos are great but I sense a symphony coming on...

- you’re funny 😄

Teaching Eden: Ch 02. The Coach is not connecting

- it’s publishing approximately weekly, hun. Em

A great start, looking forward to Ch2 and yet more reasons why summer dresses are one of the world's greatest inventions :)

Edging your readers… good play. Not very nice… but I don’t suppose you ever claimed to be nice. Five stars… on shear mouth-watering anticipation.

- thank you 😊. I submitted Chapter 2 today. Should publish Friday. I’m finishing writing Chapter 4 at present. Em

- just trying something, hun 😊. I hope I’m kinda nice most of the time. Em

I'm loving Eden's development over time and space. The speed with which she's amassing these willing bystanders is a fantasy all it's own. Well done!

- thank you. It’s meant to be a fantasy, but a not entirely ridiculous one. An exaggeration of real life, not a parallel dimension. Em

What has happened to Garden of Eden?

- I mention its events as this story progresses. And I refer to it at the end of Chapter 5. I am yet to write it though. Em

Great START ! Keep writing. Enticing. Want more. 5 STARS.

- thank you. There are 4 more chapters 😊 Em

I'm enjoying Eden's exhibitionist side, can't wait to read more!

- I hope you enjoy this series. A bit of everything in it really. You might be interested to know that I plan another Eden story. It will be set before this one and while she is in grad school in NYC. Called The Garden of Eden 😊 Em