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Tears of the Fallen Ch. 23

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GONE!!

THEY ARE GONE!!

Deep scores lined the page, the words carved into the paper. But it wasn't that which made her throw up...no that was bad enough, but it wasn't that which had turned her blood to ice. It was the very last entry, written so neatly and precisely...

Dear Kothari...

I'm here

A

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The End...for now

To be continued in Storm of Shadows

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BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca4 months ago

Jesus Christ ! I am so hooked.

Irenae21Irenae21about 1 year ago

So many travels later and I still miss kothari so much. I hope he and Agony have become one now and are coexisting well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
excellent

excellent excellent excellent excellent ...

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 5 years ago
Anonymous check on Amazon

Jaz's biography has more information if you'd like to follow.

I agree this series is amazing!

I hope to some day see it as a movie saga. Would be better and probably top TLOR.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Powerful, thrilling and mesmerizing...

...this is my 4th time reading it. I just wish it could be made into a movie series like Underworld....but yours is far more interesting....Hope you will continue expanding these different series into different directions... If you ever get them published in books, I'd be one of the first to buy. Thank you.

realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanalmost 6 years ago
EFFIN AMAZING

This series rocks! You freaking rock!

A_StoneA_Stoneover 6 years ago
When this series becomes published...

I want a signed copy! I’m late in the game and wish I started following you all those years ago, but I’m glad I came upon it! I find myself thinking of your characters and imagining what will happen to them. I love each and every one of them and Im DYING to hear Kothari’s story! It’s going to be EPIC!!!

I remember a comment back when Demetri and Rafe killed Richard Graves that said that they missed seeing the vamps go dark side. I love it when they do it too and can’t wait to see the carnage that will rain down upon the European covens *hehehe*

I think one of my favorite quotes can be applied nicely here...

“Tell them they can either live in my world, or die in theirs” -Khaleesi

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!

Read this story several times, and still love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
2nd time reading this series

I started with FTI and just finished Tears. This is the best writer I have read in a lot of years. Seriously, go to Amazon, get the 1st book, read the entire series a couple of times. There were little things that I missed the first time thru.

Thank you Jaz... you have spent a lot of time and energy entertaining all of us for years. I wish you a huge success with this series when it all comes out in print. I know I will be buying this!

j76475j76475almost 8 years ago
Great Storry

I found this late but just finished this part. Keep it up. Trying to read each section as I find them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

This story is amazing, please keep it going :)

Shadow21GXShadow21GXover 8 years ago
All hail JazCullen!!

This is a remarkable series that I find enjoyable, thrilling, and can see myself reading again and again from start to finish. I'm ecstatic that this is free yet confused because something this good should be selling like hot cakes. I can't wait to read the next series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Where is Storm of Shadows?

oooh i sooo dislike not being able to finish a story when it's in so many series and you are pulled along in so many different lives and directions, please please post the story here?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
This is the next chaper..Jaz blog link

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
impatient

Literally antsy for the next series. Please post anything. I have been waiting for his story. Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
oh please hurry????!!!!!!!!???!!!!!!!!

oh you do need to work on the rest....oh please hurry?!

V

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I'm in withdrawal!!

Jaz, please, oh please, say you've got a chapter or two about ready for us!! I've read the whole series over and over to keep my fix going. Can't wait to see the next series, Storm of Shadows.

blacgoldblacgoldabout 9 years ago
spoiled

You've set the bar so high that I've finally given up on other vampire and were stories. Please keep writing.. I'll keep waiting patiently. You are hands down my favorite author.. Thank you.

johntc24johntc24about 9 years ago
Inspirational writing

Your stories flow with an enviable smoothness, your characters are breathtaking. I have enjoyed all your work and eagerly anticipate the following sections. Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wonderful!!

Thanks so much for writing such lovely stories! I look forward to reading the rest of them as they become available.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hello petal, lovely Jaz!!!

I've been reading your stories for years and just cannot wait to find out what happens next. That's it.

I know others want to know more speedily than this, but that's their problem.

We are all thinking about Kothi and what he might mean to the next story. But the story's perfect as it is... until next time :)

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