by mypenname3000
You would think these authors would at least read what they had written. I guess it's too much to ask.
The girl talking like that was too over done. It took away from the coming lust. Ridiculous
Loved the story line, great concept.
The incestuous sex was hot, but all spoilt by Alice's dialogue, she is a bimbo not a child.
A little drawn out and repetitive, but still worth five stars. I wrote a mother-daughter mind control story and was looking for other examples (to see if mine was reasonably distinct) and was pleased to find this one.