All Comments on 'The Blowjob Booth'

Enthusiasm for giving head is one thing, but 12-year-old-at-a-Hannah-Montana-show fangirl squealing over giving blowjobs, for five pages, when it got old before she even got into the cop's car, was way over the top and way too much--and that doesn't even take into account suspension of disbelief over BJ booths, BJ competitions, BJ fairs, and BJ scholarships. Sheesh.

Yes, Sierra. That's right. It *is* over-the-top. That's why it's -fantasy-. This website is thrives primarily on sexual fantasy. If there were blowjob booths, blowjob competitions, and blowjob-obsessed teenage girls who blew customers in public for $20, I probably wouldn't write about it. I don't want realistic. I want ridiculously excessive. I'm even rating my own work: disco! Thank you for your feedback. -D.W.-

Obviously it's completely over the top, but I have no problem with that. It's fun to imagine a couple of girls that slutty. <p>

However, you do have a tendency to add dashes in between words where there shouldn't be any, which makes for a jarring read. Roadside is one word. State fair has no dash. Glove box has no dash. The only time you ever add a dash is when you take two completely unrelated words and want to turn them into one word, of a sort. <p>

For example, a cum-whisperer. (whatever the hell that is, heh.) <p>

A cum swallower, however, has no dash. Still, it was a pretty fun read. :)

This was a fun, over-the-top story, but was diminished greatly by the needless, inaccurate stereotyping on page 3. Leave out the stupid racist comments and your work will improve.

Fantastic story!

Please tell us more of Kristi's adventures soon!

Many thanks!

Great story, I like the concept a lot, keep writing, it was very good.

I've absoutely loved both stories so far! Over the top indeed, just how I like them!

It is so absurd it is just a "kick" to read wishing something like this was reality. I loved the story and it's kinky details only you didn't "finish" the BJ's in the beginning. Why?

One of my most favourite stories!

It's a huge tragedy that it hasn't been followed up by further tales of Kristi and her friends.

Great stuff.MOre more more please !!!!!

But howbout with muslim birds perhaps suckin cock. Get a bit of difference goin

You activated the imagination so brilliantly. The effervescence of their personalities really enhanced the mood. Thank you for putting this out there. Thank you.

No sequel? Good story telling.

Very... very boring. Repetitive and one dimensional.

There might actually be a few females like this but I think it's a lot more likely that there are men who would suck cocks like this.

However, I'll give it a 5 for outrageous comedy..... certainly not for reality.....

Love this world of BJ obssessed teens that you created. Wish there was followup chapters.

Who cares if it's realistic or not? Given the option most guys would take a trip to that place!

I enjoyed the story although it was a bit long for me. Some good variety with the rimjobs and I especially liked Kristi drinking piss in her bonus offer to her last customer.

it was a little light on the blowjob talk, swallowing cum, and that. other than that, a classic!

This was a very good plot and premise, but i'm sorry, some of the parts made me want to rip my hair out, mainly the dialogue parts.

Great fantasy, but could anyone swallow 266x10mls of cum in a day, nearly half a US gallon, best I managed was about 150mls at a party, even so great fun.

great story, wish the world was like that, people free to do what they like. My jaw gets sore after one big cock, otherwise I'd luv to do it, maybe the small cock only under seven inches in length and two inches in diameter.

Such a funny and dirty little romp. A few odd mechanics in the writing, but you can tell it was a good time penning it. 5 stars, 4 of which are for the phrase, "blowjob addicted cock goblin."