by emptyhead424
So glad you're back! Hopefully you revisit your NYC Zcouple.
But the sex scenes were lacking in eroticism.
Belly? OK. What else about her is attractive to him? Did he masturbate thinking about her pregnant body? What did he think about while he masturbated? What thoughts made him ejaculate? Does he like her breasts? Would he like to see them? Would he like to feel how heavy they've gotten? Would he like to squeeze them? Kiss them? Lick them? Suck them? Can he see how stiff her nipples are? How does that make him feel?
And so much more.
Had real potential. Didn't deliver. Three stars.