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by Steveboner
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A common theme but to me the story was too bland, not descriptive nor any emotional aspects. Three stars.
You lost me when Dave referenced "do sexually things to you"! You're All idiots!
I LOVE hot, sexy stories about things like this. And this one was fairly hot and fairly sexy.
But the writing was terrible. WAY too many commas that were not needed; missing words, misspellings, and the entire 'threat' angle of it was backwards.
I'll look at Pt. 02 and see if there's any reason to hope to read Pt. 03.
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