All Comments on 'The Diary Ch. 03'

Superb dialogue and mood setting. Hot,sophisticated lovemaking as well. A great series that demands a sequel, or an epilogue or whatever. Good on you, BMW. Cheers!

Guy makes a mistake - big time - when he reads his girlfriend's diary and she finds out about it. In a rage she storms out and the rest of this story could be entitled - chasing Jeanie. A delightful romp as he struggles to get back in her good graces. A fun Read!

finally. i waited so long. cant wait for thenext installment =]

i see you love to torture us lol.. That was a great follow up. I really enjoyed your story.

The writing style is superb! Danny's character left me smiling and wanting to just hear any story from her perspective! What a tremendous talent for story telling...of course we all want more!

omg im reading all of ur stories this 1 is s intresting plz write more thx to u i have awsome dreams at night. ur sweet =]

Please write more, love and desire with a sense of humour, the personalities sound so real and clumsy, like real life.

Love and kisses Kathryn

I really enjoyed your series, The Diary. Please write chapter 4! Keep up the great work! I have also read some of your other stories and am going to read the rest of them now.

NICELY DONE..plus this was the funniest story,EVER

I loved the humor! This was brilliant! Hey, I wonder if there's a diary like that here in the house I bought last year? Maybe in the attic ... I haven't been up there. Hmmmmm ... ~ L

It may have been a minute but I would love to know that you're inspired to write another chapter.

How soon can you release your next installment? 5 🌟's for all three chapter's.

Still being read in 2024