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All Comments on 'The End of High School Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Are you Writing an Incest Story or a Novel

First, you're a pretty good writer. Some of your interactions are a bit much, but not too bad. Still, this is a forum for erotic, incest stories and so far, your is a somewhat erotic, possibly romantic, couple story. I'm guessing you're loosing readers at this point from a lack of sex action. You really need to get the action going if you care anything about the interest of your readers. Honestly, I only gave you 25% instead of 0% because I can see a lot of potential in your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great build up

I love that this story doesn't just jump to mindless sex. Incest is bigger than a one night stand, and the fact that this story has some real build up is what makes it special. Please continue the story.

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