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- The Fuck It List - Ch. 01
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by macymadison
- 19 Comments
What a delightful surprise to read a first-rate piece of narrative here. Thank you.
Amazing. A descriptive adventure down the rabbit hole for the senses. Articulate, refined with extraordinary finesse. Truly the most eloquent story I have had the pleasure to
read.
The perfect story is hard to write , but you just did that , what started as a sad and horrible position for anyone to find themselves in , you managed to make it seem right in the end .
You have to keep on writing this story. This is one of the best I've ever read on this site. Your characterization, pacing, choice of metaphors, and style is exquisite!
It will be interesting to see how he gets out of life the last six months or so!
5
Top 1% for mechanics, style, descriptive narrative... Congratulations and thank you. I must check out some of your other works.
Towering, monumental, elemental, inspiring. So pleased to see "ch 01" appended to the title. 5 + fave.
The incurable romantic in me wants Michael to return to Net, tell her the whole story, and ask her to join him on his final journey. However, this story is so exquisitely written that I’ll follow it wherever it leads without complaint. 5 stars.
As someone who has lost a lives partner to the big C I started to read this with some trepidation but, as the story unfolded and I got in to it I realised it was a story I could enjoy it is So good, looking forward to subsequent chapters . Five stars.
All the requisites were here; antagonist, protagonist, hero and damsel in blue dress.
Excellent prose, enjoyed every word. Thank you so much.
Excellent start. There's a connection with him and Net, I hope he keeps in touchor takes her with him. Five stars, looking for more.
I absolutely love this story and look forward to reading the rest of it and your other stories. You are a very good writer. This is very well done.