All Comments on 'The Inheritance'
by RDJohnson
- 128 Comments (Page 2)
Love this story and hope you make it a series. I would love reading how he took control of the maid, trainer and sister.
Great story so far, it clear how this story is going to go though. Interesting too see who his father has pick to wear the other trinkets and how many of his kids his mother is going to have especially after pumping her full of sperm and unprotected ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
One star for not finishing the story. Hate these unfinished stories. Literotica really needs a category for unfinished work. That way we don't waste time reading stories even the authors do not care about.
This is the first fantasy story that has kept my attention and got me off, I look forward to more
It was good at the start, but I lost interest. It's all about one character that gets whatever he wants, any time he wants, to whoever he wants. It's boring. Sex, more sex, more sex. There's no storyline. Everybody does for "me" It's an overboard ego trip. Two stars at best.
I read a story similar to this that was written quite a while ago. I remember it being finished, this one clearly is not.
I see you have been publishing as recently as a few months ago. It would be nice if you continued this story, as you have an excellent beginning, and there are far too many unfinished stories. It is quite disappointing to the readers to buy into characters only to be left hanging.
I just discovered this author and love this writing! I found this story really enjoyable. I plan to read the rest of the stories here and hope more are on the way.
Very well written really nicely balanced am going to read more by this author, please another instalment👍
LOVED this story. I have high hopes of seeing more of it in the future. Please keep writing on this ,want to hear more of Oxana nd more on his sister who was only briefly mentioned.
I probably WILL continue this story at some point.
I already have about half a chapter made, actually.
Sadly, it ended up taking the story in a direction I did not want, so once I pick up that particular pen again, most of it will likely get trash canned.
For now, my Patreon supporters seem to want me to focus on Oaths to Keep, so that's what's up next.
But rest assured that I do plan on picking this story up again at some point.
Really interesting storyline. Shame it hasn't been continued yet. Parts of it felt a little rushed or undersupported. For example, a half sister was mentioned in passing and never again. Also, what made his mom decide to wear her ring? 4*
This was a great story. I am greatly looking forward to future chapters.
I am going to check your other works, to see if they sate my appetite this story has opened.
Okay great start! Now it's been two years and no more of this story finish what you start. I see you are still writing so complete it. Don't be one of those writer that does not complete stories it is an enjoyable read.