All Comments on 'The Modern Prometheus'

beautiful.

my only pondering is why now he suddenly can stay in the mortal world and before they both acted as if they never could be fully together. that's the only detail that has me puzzled, apart from that, excellent read. Des is a hoot!!!

was a suprisingly sweet tale that was well written and most enjoyable thank you for posting

I just... Wow! I want to live with these guys! Excellent story, Lily.

Fanciful and erotic, mixing humor, affection and heat.

I honestly didn't expect to find such a wonderfully romantic story from this category in this contest. It really was such a nice change from the other contest storys I have read. I look forward to reading more of your storys in the future.

Brie and Eli are so sexy and sweet together! There's something lovely and genuine about their yearning and I want to know more about them. This is a completely charming story!

I just wish you had explained how Eli is able to remain, with just the occasional visit back home.

Love the characters and their chemistry! Good luck in the contest.

There seem to have been some inconsistency with this story, namely the fact of their first union narrated in the story. It says that when their powers merged within her when she took that oath, her clothes where burned right off of her, but later in her bedroom, without any pause whatsoever for her to be able to redress, she is again wearing clothes?!? That just does not compute! Other than that though, well written story with nary a hint of misused words or weird sentences. A job well done, almost perfect...

I hadn't found your stories until now, but damn! I wish I had found them sooner, because I want this story to be a series now. It's just so good!