All Comments on 'The Mournful Child'

There is so much potential for a follow up. For example, does Peter get his aunt pregnant? Does he carry on in China or leave her and go back home? In that story arc, does she follow him?

...but you sure need an editor. There are far too many mistakes to fully enjoy the story without distractions.

Since when is Singapore in China?

Can't you use Google for research?

It's an independent city state off the coast of Malaysia.

Also please learn that your and you're are different and use them accordingly.

Nice Peter is getting his true inheritance.

Incoherent nonsense..

Enjoyed the story, soul!

Thanks jneric

Peter's the name Peter's the game for his aunt all that and money too, Thanks for sharing.

But the start was bullshit.

PETER HAS BECOME A VERY LUCKY BOY.

ANTIE NOW LOVES HIS COCK,

GOOD STORY, WELL DONE.

..THANKS..

I like. Nice story.

Not too bad

The beginning was implausible and the trigger event when she see his cock and the resulting sudden change after 3 years seems implausible as well. Also not cool to imply that all asians have subpar dicks man.

Statistically, they have smaller dicks, but that's because penis size is generally proportional to male height and build (though more in relation to 2D:4D), much as vaginal depth is proportional to female height and build. Sure, there are outliers, but 95% of people fit within the central portion of that bell curve. Fortunately for humanity, men and women usually fit just fine. The aunt and nephew are just outliers (aside from being emotionally messed up) in the physical department.