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by Christie052780
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You have the potential to be a very good writer, but your concept, the idea of parents selling their teen daughter as a sex slave over a house, is just disgusting and a total turn-off.
Maybe 50 years ago, 100 years ago, in Utah, Mormoms practiced bigamy. It would help readers if this story was placed in an American Frontier setting, if Randy was a preacher, and if Christy was younger.
Superbly written.
I'd love to read a full version in which the background and the characters' thoughts are fully detailed.
This seems to be a recurring theme of yours; babysitters and non-consent. You're good at it! Twenty years ago I was a babysitter for a couple and the mister ended up being my first and it's something I don't regret and your story (except for the wife part) sounds really close to my experience. Good story!
Excellent work, like usual. You have an impressive talent and you write awesome stories. Thank you!
Please write more nonconsent stories. The way you write is really hot!!!
The gradual development of thsi story is a winner...and I love Christie's fetish!
What a HOT story. I'm still panting. It was excellent. You have definitely found a new fan!
I liked the way the girl didn't just have orgasm after orgasm as she was raped. The story would have been so much better were it not for the last paragraph.
A lovely and erotic story...This is an idlyic portrait of polygamous life..In reality,polygamy is a war zone....there is nothing positive in it..all the participants and off springs are psychologically affected....As an erotica,a nice yarn.
You had such a strong story with such a weak and creepy ending. It took the amorous mood right out of me to know she was sold as a sex slave by her parents! Wow, terrible ending.
Your stories are amazingly written, I love reading everything you write from Basington to this story of a girl sold to pay off a debt. Can't wait to see more.
Different text than other stories I've read on this site. Where were they, Utah?
Great story! People are complaining about the ending, but I like it. I would just have liked a bit more detail about how she felt when she found out and how she felt when she realised that she was pregnant.
You are my favorite author and this has always been my favorite story. Please continue writing more and publishing here. And please write more bisexual encounters. <3
Did this 18 year old young woman ( you Don't become a Woman after the 1st time with a man, you are a Woman anyway) not do biology at school, have sex education classes? Not masturbated? Even for a fantasy it's unbelievable!! In the end she finds out she was sold into sexual slavery by her parents and 4 kids later this it was the best thing they did for her?? Not bisexual because the 2 women didn't have sex, however the wife helped with the 1st rape after helping getting her drunk/drugged 1st and getting her ready for her husband. But not for the 2nd and 3rd times. A commentator said about Utah 50 or 100 years ago this went on, but actually still does today in a Mormon sect...and in cults and in the backwaters of America. Someone else mentioned N Korea, really? And Iran, but there's alot more countries this happens, in Afghanistan father's sell their daughters for money to buy food, the daughter 10,11 years old (as soon as they get their 1st period, they are marriageable and this happens in other countries too) married overnight to a taliban fighter twice or even 3 times her age. Sometimes they just take the girls with threats of violence. Other countries, arranged marriage and if the girl does something to bring a precived dishonour to the family, honour killings happen not just in that country, but wherever they have emigrated to. Female genital mutilation,FGM or female circumcision happens to 7,8 yr old girls, some survive but some then die in childbirth. Sexual Assault, rape and murder on girls and women is worse now than their mothers time, so is girls and women's rights and rights about their own bodies. When religion and politics are together, then girls and women have hardly any rights. It's not just Islamic or Catholic countries, right wing protestants as well. So fantasy story, but an unfortunate reality for many.