All Comments on 'The Oathkeepers Ch. 01'

And we are off to a great start! Well written and smoking hot. I hope we see more of this soon. Thanks for sharing!

Encore! This has me doing a little happy dance. Bring it!

I wish she'd fought paragon a bit more but i like the story.

What a great story, looking forward to more. xxx

Great story! Well done

grrrr I wish she had fought more and called him out for being a rapist, I had hoped that she might bring about a revolution, e.g. get these jerks to set up a proper dating agency with Earth or smth, but now I'm worried it might turn into another magic dick alert... You are such a great writer, please give her more spine so she can redeem these idiots after some serious grovelling on their side....

She gave in far too quickly for this to have any degree of realism. I know it’s a bizarre comment for a sci-fi story but her side of the story is all about human nature.

Well written though. Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Well written, if only i could have imagine :)

Well done! Easily a favorite!