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by JBEdwards
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I liked the voyeur house idea. Well done! Five stars. Joanie, Melissa, Phil, et al., made it seem like homecoming at any college, but 'tis the season for homecomings too! I guess it was homecoming at JB College!
Amazing story! I always enjoy your characters you are able to make them come alive even in a short story.
An outstanding story! Very creative on your part and very well told. 5 stars!
You deserve more...
...than a mere five stars for your creativity. What a brilliant idea to make an old house your narrator. What with Thanksgiving, Christmas and New Year's Eve coming up, your human characters should end in a state of sheer exhaustion, fit only to sleep their way through the first week of January. Congratulations on a great piece of work.
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