All Comments on 'The Palace'

Much to be discovered and unveiled, it would seem Hoping to read more of this bizarre world, with background and perhaps some fleshing out of the characters. Very intriguing!

This is a really great story! I hope that you make a sequel.

Though the story is a little more brutal than I would normally enjoy, your writing is excellent, so you kept me to the end. My only complaint would be the shortage of cultural context, to explain the choice she evidently makes to enter this life of slavery.

Perhaps that will be made clear in future episodes. I do hope you continue this story.

This is one of my all time favorites, and I would love to see more regarding what life in the palace.

Looking forward to the next chapter for explanations and character development.

Huh? So the master says to expect mostly pain and pleasure is the exception. What kind of barbaric people has a much greater population of men who would prefer to brutalized a woman than pleasure her? Even in our screwed up society the ratio of sadist to vanilla by far leans towards the vanilla and the sadist who delivers pain, without consent or knowledge that the recipient is a masochist, is even less. There is zero context here. Is this a brothel or a bdsm themed establishm? Sorry but this is like walking into a movie 30 minutes late. Jumping right into only what's happening without any explanation of why is confusing and one dimensional.

Then again if Anon has read anything else of your writing they would see the trend, of misogyny, full of alpha males who can do virtually nothing wrong and when they do they’re rewarded. From what I’ve seen it’s all hypocrisy and contradictory. On top of that it’s peddling the Madonna: Whore Complex hand in hand with social and sexual slavery for women. Still churning out extremist stories seems to pay well as the author is published.

Lol, all that makes me sound like a feminist which couldn’t be further from the truth. I hate positive discrimination it does more harm than good.

Tess (UK)

I don't follow why there is no description of what the handler looks like - weird storytelling to me