All Comments on 'The Pirate Girl'

A lil short but good.

your story was overall pretty good. it had a nice theme, all the usually expected scenes and a climax for the hero, lol. I did notice however her skirt that barely covered her cheeks suddenly became so long the cab driver had to help her with it. keep it up, you'll develop more skills with more practice.

Fucking Hot! I love parties like this. Where can I get an invite. Jean and i would love to share stories!

Always steel-stiff. Batman and Catwoman were there. Whatever happened to Robin?

Anyway, it was hot. Good luck in the Halloween contest.

he's too young, and you know that would be "Robin the cradle".

I too noticed the short dress turned long. Pretty soundly written but still get an editor, it will be that much better. Email me and we can talk more.

Thank you guys for your comment! And I would like to thank for Privates1stClass for his editing. All the smoothy parts are his work, and all the mistakes are mine :)

I loved your story and I hope you write more. GREAT JOB

Thanks!

Reading this realty makes me want to fuck

Very fucking hot, Sandy. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Hope to see more stories coming, or is that cumming from you in the future.

Thanks to everyone for reading the story! It is part of my new book Office Sluts 2: Wild Adventures available at Smashwords!

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Arousing, I would have liked to have heard about him watching his witch getting her share too. Thanks for writing.

Concise, fun and her sexy is a good combo and you do it well. I love a happy gangbang story told from a feminine perspective (I refer to the author, of course, not the narrator). Keep up the good work.

Thanks to everyone!