by ValoryG
Nice beginning...am curious as to where you will take it - and how you will take it there.
I would have suggested holding off on publishing until a lot more had transpired to move the plot forward, such as them having sex.
I hope you write more chapters to this story. I can picture how it might progress and look forward to see if I am write. I love that you are staring slow and make me want more.
Ok, you've got me building so much wetness with real interesting characters with intriguing back grounds and visual imagery and then, THATS IT!?!!! N
There had Better be a part 2 and soon!