by Kingmaker711
Good story, erotic, detailed, dynamic, with few errors. Thanks!
It's still very well written. While I agree that corruption is more interesting, I'll still take what the author gives us anyday.
Keep up the good work man.
I'm really curious where you'll go from there. There is still a bit of mystery about who and what Baal and his minions exactly are.
Now I'd advise you to introduce some heroes They would be people trying to prevent the apocalypse and also characters the reader would like to see being corrupted and falling one by one.