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Click here"I do so love novelty," his elven wife said, sliding out of the griffon's wagon.
"Then this will blow your mind, m'lady," the gnome said, as the three headed towards the main building of the enclave.
- COMMENTS
What an interesting story and setting you’ve created. I can’t wait to see where it goes. Thank you!
I started reading this story, while waiting for the next chapter of another of your epic stories. I find myself now completely captured with this marvelous tale!
As always, thank you for sharing with your time and marvelous ability to paint a picture in our minds so beautifully!
Sincerely
Daniel
As impressive as expected and that is constantly a joy. Your characters always have a realistic quality that I have trouble pinpointing but nevertheless thrill me when they converse as it feels like I am listening in to someone’s personal life. Being late to the party on this story at least gives me the ability to do a multi chapter binge read which is always a nice bonus. My thanks for your work as always.
J.D.
What a compelling story. I love of your works! I find myself impatient to read the next chapter.
I hope to see all your stories until to the end. Such a great writer and educator in literary!
Liking it so far, not quite as much as some of your others, but certainly interested to see where you take it.
Very enjoyable so far - interesting premise and good execution! I'm looking forward to Chapter 2.
Promising start. I like the protagonist couple and the aspects of the world shown so far. A good job of exposition in this chapter, not too heavy on data dumps - though taking advantage of RPG assumptions helps I’m sure. Looking forward to more.