All Comments on 'The Waitress'

Jamal and the dildo gang are out of jail and back in this piece of garbage’s story. The line “if your wife won’t take bbc, then she’s not a sexy wife” has to be the stupidest thing I’ve ever read. The entire story reads like that.

I threw up mid way through this.

The wife is a whore. Her cunt is diseased. And the main character encourages her to be whore?

This entire story is ridiculous.

Seek mental help.

thats the biggest pile of garbage i have ever read here. please dont submit anymore trash

there it is the IR shit again. wrong place rated low

So Deb was 17 when she got pregnant and you were 21. So she went from high school to motherhood and yet she “….was quite skilled…” skilled at what exactly? She never went to university and you were in prison for statutory rape.

Not exactly an auspicious beginning. Of course, it makes sense why you would want her to be a stripper. Surprised you didn’t molest your kids while you were at it.

What is the meaning of this story? Well, at least some? Even the smallest and most dubious? Author, please answer...

wtf ?

??? this is not a story

wow! the more I see your writings, the more I am astonished.

You seem to have serious self-esteem issues, and degrading and humiliating fetishes with a predominance for the BBC.

I hope you are being followed and cared for by competent professionals.

Get well soon.

Give up

So why do black guys have to put a woman on display as they fuck her? Are they that insecure? Your stories continue to get worse with every new submission. 1*

Wrong section. There is a section specifically set up for IR fetishes.

This is a story???

"She was board as could be." Wow, a wife made out of wood! Oh, wait, I'm guessing you meant Debbie was "bored". My point being, please find an editor, because honestly, this wasn't the only error.

Should be in IR.

Loved everything about it.

-26thNC Approved

Piss poor effort from a diseased mind. Please tell me this is the only turd you've dropped into existence. Stop now. Please.

A total load of rubbish,

26thNC/Whackdoodle/Gmann006 is just mad that these women are getting all the black cock that he craves. But for some reason I think he's probably had more black snake up his shitter than any of these women have.

ONE STAR for polluting the LW category with garbage stories.

I really don't know why I keep opening one of your stories--guess I'm just wondering how far you can go. Are you a black guy with a little dick or a white guy with serious confidence problems? Either way it ain't good.

Another idiot who thinks his racist shit is something special!

Where is all the tip and hooker money?? Gave her away for free?

poor

BBC mythology meets somebody stupid to think it's credible to have people speaking "She likes BBC" (as an acronym) and believing that normal, sentient humans actually speak to each other that way. Especially, given that it's pure myth, anyway.

For every one good story on here, there comes a flood of utter shit polluting LW, you have to be pretty pathetic to enjoy this...

Is this author ever going to write anything but garbage? This guys brain must be on drugs 24/7. Nobody, in their right mind, could write such garbage. 1* Only the likes of 26thNCuck and Odiouser would favor this shit. The stench that comes off them is permeating this category.

Boring waste of space.

Shit fo brains strikes again in the latrine. Way to swallow, sucker.

Yet zillions light years from a tinge of talent, still crawling opposite.

Captcha

You still suck. Your writing is garbage, on so many levels. What is it about quality over quantity don't you get? You're like LoveofMylife whatever fucking number he uses, you quickly throw shit together and then throw it out for us to vomit from reading. And its all merely slightly different takes on the same premise.

We get it you've a shitty misogynistic view of women, spend more time jacking off thinking about some dudes cock. Thats fine, you join an ever growing group of losers (or in the vernacular of so many here "loosers") who feel the need to "create" a story as often as they pee.....hint...don't.

Not going to bother rating this. It's not worth it.

Here's my recommendation: seek professional help.

Story does not have any rosa-blanca.ru

WHY are there NO rosa-blanca.ru?

ALL IR, all tricked/forced/blackmailed Cuckold, chastised & enforced Humiliation MUST BE well FLAGGED!

PLENTY of people LIKE them, -fine, include them if you must, but they MUST all be flagged, because..

PLENTY of people HATE them- fine, give them every CHANCE to AVOID them, it's the ONLY decent thing to do,

THEN, and ONLY then, can you say DON'T read 'em if you don't like the flags! >>>>

>> in the UK, `Ronseal' Wood Preservative had a long-running ad: "Does what it says on the can!"

Perhaps Implying No more, no less? Fair enough? That is what's needed here, forget about "The Cuck-Wars" and my personal favourite "The Great-Cocky-Con" (in Black-and-White).

I believe in people's RIGHT to read about consenting adults and their foibles, and in the RIGHTS of OTHERS to AVOID accidentally reading their unflagged shit, and getting hot-under-the-collar by it! . FLAG -TAG - FLAG TAG!

Terrible. It’s rare to find an author who can write this badly: wrong words, nonsensical constructions, non-existant grammar, incorrect punctuation - basically illiterate. When you add in an author who tries to use Lit as a platform to promote his warped and misogynistic views, you have a perfect storm.

so let's hear about Monica on stage and fucked