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pretty poor all-around....
....but we'll give ya points for tryin.Next time make the reader care about characters-pistolpackinpete
Extend this story!
Don't be discouraged. This story was pretty good, technically well written, but the gal moved a little fast ot cheat on her husband after waiting so long for sex. Was that realistic? Maybe that's what bothered your aggressive critics.
i would like to read more, so get to it!
Another braindead little slut bites the dust
Whats new? Whats real? Get her drunk, fuck her. Get her an abortion, forget her. And this dumb piece of fluff just eats it up. And for the private album with the pictures. Wow, it is so private he showed her pictures of other "faithful" wives. Want to guess what he does with her pictures? Or even who he sells copies to?
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