All Comments on 'This Cock Tastes Like My Wife Ch. 02'
by Turned
- 8 Comments
If u don't like the idea then don't read it and spare the whole world you insecurities. As for the story, I love it. The only thing I can't stand is that u write in bits and pieces. Finish the whole damn thing already. Damn.
Script is meant for actors to read from because it is easy to pick the parts to read. Script is not meant for stories for general reading. Quotes, etc. read so much smoother and easier.
Because it was an instant messenger exchange. I wrote it the way it would show on your computer screen if you were having an IM exchange. Maybe that was a bad idea, but I thought most people would get it. Something to consider....
Unless this somehow turns you on then avoid this writer.
dats a 69 with yer pillow! He must be drunk spewing hate on Lit all day anonymusly as like we doant know his writeing!! Good idea for a storey.
You.masturbate while you chat with a man? You might be gay. This story turned like milk left.on the counter too long.