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proof read/edit
Next time proof read of get an editor. What is this junk "mess st the door" shouldn't it be "at" not not "st"?
hmm
got to love how people critique anonymously, even when they themselves mess up lol.. i rather liked the story.. tho the ending left me questioning
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