All Comments on 'Tiafell - The Femboy Elf Ch. 00 - Prologue'

Interesting start. Going to take some time to read the whole saga, but if the prologue is any indication will be time well spent.

Thanks. Fair warning, every chapter is longer than the last, but they’re still fairly short. Each chapter is 20+ pages by the time I finish typing them out in Word. They seem so much longer until they are published on here.

"meeting the beauty standards of even the most swallow of folks" -- did you mean "shallow'?

Also, it's not clear why the other elves hate Tiafell so vehemently... Is it because how feminine he is? Or is there some other secret reason.

It’s a secret reason that is revealed in a later chapter that will prove to become central to Tiafell’s backstory and character development.

Thanks for pointing that out, while I am careful to fix any errors I find in the editting process, I can’t promise that I will always catch everything 100% of the time. But I will fix anything that is pointed out to me.

What a great character story! Love it!