by Incestgod
ASS!!! You just had to put a cliffhanger in there. Lol I can not wait for the next part.
I loved it…. Thanks for your hard work and great story!
I was indeed left hanging!
I appreciate a cliffhanger, but I would appreciate a little more finesse, leaving a sentence ...
(Do I make my point?)
Otherwise, I am enjoying the walk down memory lane.
Well, I left it at that because I wasn't sure what qas even going to be there. I started this story on a whim and it's unfolded along the way. Made mistakes, learned a lot. Kind of like A New Begining I'm playing by ear. I'm planning a continuing series of romance novels I'm going to self publish
I really enjoyed this story as I am a time travel fan.
One comment though. I think any mention of Carol should have been Sharon instead, if my memory of the earlier chapters is correct. Also Victoria should have been Virginia.
You are correct. I changed the names of the characters because I had originally planhed on using Sharon and Virginia in a similar project I'm working on. I din't want to use the names twice in two similar story lines. I apologize for the confusion