by ywbyj
Too short and too fast paced. Slow it down, make it real. This story was anything but done. You need to do a second part.
Good story. Very sexy. I would like to read more. I hope you keep this going.
Excellent start.
Give a little more, both of these characters have more in them to give, I am sure of it.
Hot and sexy read. Love hairy bushes and big azzes. Good read. Thanks for sharing
I want more, do you plan on continuing or wrapping your "Older Neighbor Next Door" series. I really was enjoying it
Almost a mature damsel in distress, loved it. Hope you write some more of their story.
Read a lot of terrible stories and it's refreshing to find a nice one like this keep it up.
You’ve got me hook, line and sinker! This was very sweet, definitely looking forward to reading more!