- Incest/Taboo
- To The Lighthouse
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All Comments on 'To The Lighthouse'
by Saula88
- 25 Comments
Another delightfully teasing story, written in your inimitable style, unique on Literotica
Loved the story it ended a little weird it went from them having sex in the boat to him turning the keys over to the owner of the lighthouse who was that sam that stayed with them!!! What happened between him and his mother did they continue ?????? 5 stars
Beautiful storey, love the way you use words, and loved the tease ending, not what I was expecting. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thank you for writing this highly erotic beautiful story. You certainly have an inimitable refreshing way with words. You’ve the rare talent to use simple accessible words to craft engaging, vivid, appealing prose.
E.g. The mum peeing on her son: “A final torrent. The operation taking as long as it would take a long freight train to cross a bridge. And then, she is done. Time resumes.”
And another sexual situation: “ She settles back in her chair, very much the professor bringing enlightenment to a promising young student.”
An amazing literary mind.
Looking forward to your next piece of art.
Such beautiful writing. Love the clever music infusion. I’m a music lover, resonates well with me. Sheer poetry. Five stars.
I love the voyeurism and exhibitionism. I have a sense the mom and son knew all along that they were being watched, and were playing along. Skillful crafting of prose.
Love the clever twist at the end of the story. It raises interesting conjectures.
So very erotic & well-written. Truly a literary work. 5 stars! Awaiting your next submission with bated breath. You are such a joy to read.
Superbly well written. It makes my trawling thru the muck on this site worthwhile, to find an occasional gem like yours.
Another great story from you. You really had me at "Clench. Release." Keep writing, please.
Luv the devious twist at end of the story. Leaves me wondering… This is what a good story shd do. And you execute it well. 5stars!
I’m a music major. Never thot I’ll see the likes of Brahms, Ravel, Debussy, Edith Piaf, & then pop & jazz elements in a Literotica story! LOL! Really enjoyed this! Luv that philosophical bit about First Love & music.
I’m a Humanities major in uni. So cute and inspiring to read Brahms, Debussy, Ravel, Bill Evans, Georgia O’Keeffe, alongside fuck, cock in the same narrative breath. Amazing talent. And such a unique way with words.
“This is a fuck not for the timid.”
“She looks back at her son with a smile of gratitude far more than is called for.”
“Not a plasticky sweet young nubile form with sculpted implausibly perfect body machinery. There is a certain rustic architectural wisdom in her body. A classic charm.”
You did it again. knocking it out of the park. Your talents are so great, and I love reading your stories. They pull you into where you believe you're watching it all take place in real-time. Love your stores. love your writings, and love your lifestyle.
Thanks for sharing
The voyeurism and exhibitionism soooo erotic, the lovemaking scene at the sailboat mast blew me away. Love the wicked twist at the end of the story, so cleverly crafted. 5stars
This story so reminds me of the time when I took in a very good looking Airbnb guest from afar. My early 20s son and I put up a teasing erotic show for him, not by accidental CCTV as in your story, but via his room window view to our open patio and small pool. It was alot of fun, tho we stopped short of actual fucking.
Brings back fond memories of an experience 12 years ago when I was backpacking thru the UK Cornwall coastline. I stayed with a mum and son pair in a remote cliff cottage. The only property in a mile radius.
My room window had a view of the open patio, beautiful English garden, and the countryside surroundings.
The late 50s mum and the 30s son were quite loving bordering on intimate. Although I am unsure, I think they were being intimate on purpose to tease me, knowing that they were being watched.
Just when I thot that I wont be seeing more beyond teasing, they fucked in the patio on my last night there. He was sitting on the lounge chair, she was astride his thighs, fucking and flailing like the sailboat lovemaking in the story. Probably my parting gift from my hosts. The next morning at breakfast, my final meal before I departed, the mum kind of hinted that they knew I watched them fuck. It was all quite erotic.
That's a hot little story about a cliff cottage. Saula's readers always leave RED HOT stories about their past experiences. They are just as much fun to read as Saula's stories are. Please keep both coming. Gets me all hot and bothered. Thanks so much for sharing.