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Click hereLibby was willing to agree to anything. Still not sure what was going on she slowly came round to the idea she had been outsmarted for a change. "Yes." She said. The images of her mom being sold into slavery were becoming slightly ridiculous.
"That's a nice smile. You can both rest up here until your relationship is repaired. She has become a passable cook and you can keep the place clean. And, at last I can go fishing. When your both ready we can talk about something more permanent. If you want to stay, that is." He said, his last words trailing off.
She looked up at him as he gazed out the window at her mother and saw something in those grey blue eyes. He wasn't the kind of man to reveal much and she was guessing what he meant. A funny feeling stirred her stomach. It was surprising to think this stranger was taking an interest in her mom and that it was a pleasant one.
- COMMENTS
I like the basic idea but I find it hard to believe she couldn't prove he'd made a mistake and still paid him... more thought should have been put in to that detail.
Also, that bitch of a daughter still never got broken... the mom is still a trained helpless slut too.
How did the trainer even find out about this and what does it have to do with the piano instructor?
I guess he want to marry the mother and the daughter cares abut her more now? Sort of a happy ending I guess, but not fulfilling.
I like the basic idea but I find it hard to believe she couldn't prove he'd made a mistake and still paid him... more thought should have been put in to that detail.
Also, that bitch of a daughter still never got broken... the mom is still a trained helpless slut too.
How did the trainer even find out about this and what does it have to do with the piano instructor?
I guess he want to marry the mother and the daughter cares abut her more now? Sort of a happy ending I guess, but not fulfilling.
And I never comment about the author. But this was so crappy that I have to wonder if you couldn't benefit from psychological help?
Read the story more carefully and you'll understand how it happened!
The mom gets herself confused with her stepdaughter? How the hell do you even MANAGE that?
i totally enjoyed the writing and the way the story weaved and that it had a lot of unexpected turns. thank You for the pleasant reading
Hey Story Teller,
Great Idea, and a good story to go along with it. Keep it up!