by regularguy13
You threw a twist in that would never had been expected. Good writing. It was intense!!
It is always hard to vote and comment on a thread story like this as I tend to read compulsively from one chapter to the next.. but I just had to take a break and say . wow... what a wonderful series.. so engrossing, so beautiful, so hot! and this chapter was just that little bit more superb!!! now on to chapt 20!!
That was sill, confused and not in charactor with the rest of the series.
Thanks, an unusual wrinkle. I enjoyed the happy/sad moment.