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Click here"Who are you?" Jenny demanded. "What am I doing here?" The nightmare came racing back quickly. This was the incredibly sexy girl that had been bound below her. She looked even more beautiful in the white sheets of this bed.
"I'm Lindsey, you are in my bed. I have no idea how you - how we - got here." Lindsey didn't know what else to say.
"I think..., I think we were kidnapped last night at the gym."
Jenny stared at her a long time - "It was more than kidnapped. That was humiliating. Have you called the police?"
"I just woke up, I would have no idea what to say or tell them," Lindsey responded lost in thought.
"Where are my clothes?" Jenny asked looking around. There they were on the floor. Jenny jumped up naked and started to pull on her jeans, sans underwear in the rush. Then she pulled on her tank top quickly. She turned back to Lindsey.
Lindsey admired how sexy this exotic asian girl was before her, thin waist in those jeans and small breasts visible under the tank top.
"Who are you?" Lindsey asked.
"Jenny," she answered.
"Sit down Jenny, we have to figure this out."
- COMMENTS
I loved it. What a fun story. I hope we get another chapter.
Maybe where the girls take revenge…
A truly exceptional story it made my mind work attempting to feel what they did
Just read through all your stories, loved your writing style and the detail you weave into your work :)
You cannot just end it like that! There are so many questions that need answers-like 'who is the female controller?' And why did she kidnap the girls in the first place? And what is to become of the two 'workout knockouts?' And are they going to be blackmailed in some manner, or what? Come on, Aspire2Provide! Please provide us with these, and other answers!
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First off, I'd like to say to Anon who says he couldn't read the story simply to minor grammatical errors: fuck you. Put on a coat, go outside and locate the nearest sex shop. Once you do, walk inside, find the biggest dildo you can find and literally fuck yourself up the ass with it. If you intent to point out to someone, in such a discriminating manner, that their grammar is ''bad'', I suggest you revise your own.
With that said.... :)
Amazing story! Loved it. I had to think for a moment how your contraption was set up (it's four in the morning so that may explain why I was lacking in imagination) but the fact it was a female kidnapper and that the whole thing was set on timer like a Jigsaw torture device was thrilling, exciting, GOD DAMN NO WORDS CAN EXPRESS HOW AWESOME THIS IS! Please write more!
If I see you one day, I'll buy you two beers. But you need to drink them down in under 60 seconds or Grammar Nazi here will be telling you how to drink them.
Great story and don't let them tell you different. If someone is that hung up on grammar - they aren't paying attention to the story. Get a life.
Sorry for the editing mistakes - I must have uploaded the wrong version. I will see if there is a way for me to edit the posted story.
Writing bondage like this gets extra credit for difficulty. Too often, the stories can get lost in the bondage details, yet you did it perfectly! I won't ask you to continue this story (this is a good ending point), but I won't mind a bit if you do. If you decide not to, I would ask you to consider doing comparable stories in the future, because you do NC bondage better than most writers.
Love the story, very creative, don't worry about grammar and punctuation, bring on more of the concept and action! Cheers! And Chapter 3!