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Click here"Bare asses?" Laura asked Bailey, who nodded.
Spankings are back on the menu, Kent smiled back at Bailey, watching the two girls slip out of their pants. And Laura and Bailey are still friends. This is going to work out after all.
Fin.
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Thank you.
Thank you to everyone who read, liked and especially commented.
Thank you to Bae for all her reading and editing, and especially her perspective.
Thank you, Literotica.
Cheers,
Xavier Torch.
- COMMENTS
Honestly this was just a great read! Something about the writing style had me thinking until I figured out around chapter 20ish that it felt like it was written like Dune. Like 4 chapters later the main character referenced Dune and I almost died.
I took my time reading this, making it last as long as possible and I really enjoyed every chapter of your story. There were times when I was really turned on and times when I just enjoyed learning about the characters. You were able to slowly escalate the erotic side and keep the characters respectful at the same time, not easy to do. There was a lot of insight in how young people might think in their situation and throwing in a religious young lady was very interesting. Your character development was great, which is necessary to write a worthwhile story and at the same time it was very sexual. 5 stars and now I'm going to have to read more of your stories. Thanks for the entertainment.
I'm glad I took a chance on this series; I'm not even particularly turned on by spanking, but this turned out terrific. Very enjoyable.
Wow. I usually shy away from the multi part stories. Very creative. Addicting. I couldn’t wait to start each new chapter.
Truly riveting reading. Thank you. Definitely the best story I’ve read on this site. It flowed. It worked. I couldn’t put it down until the end. Nicely done.
Amazing writing. I stumbled on this by accident and it was amazing. I just couldn’t stop reading episode after episode. Bravo!
This is probably the best series I've read on lit. And I don't even like spanking, at all. Like I'd consider it a turnoff for me. But the way you dealt with the emotions of the characters still had me hooked. I normally never comment, but had to for this one. Great work!
Just finished the series. Read it over a couple of days. Fantastic story and writing, thank you!
A great story.
I don't usually read fetish stories and I'm not sure how I started this story. I am truly glad I did, it is probably the best story I have read her at Lit.
I was able to read the whole story without having to wait for the next part to be published. I will be looking at more of your stories.
You are an excellent story teller, it seemed like I was watching a movie.
Thank you.
How does he not hit them eventually or accidentally
This is by far the best story I have read on this.site. Thank you. When is the movie coming out. Heh heh
A fascinating and original love story. Expertly written, enthralling and addictive. A huge thank you to xtorch, you are a skilled and gifted story teller and I applaud you.
I find spanking hot, though my preference is FM. I found these exciting because Bailey was in the lead all the time, as she realised at some stage. You couldn't prevent the description of all those spanks becoming repetitious, but I never got bored. The characters developed, and you even managed to sneak in some serious ethical discussions. And I liked Carson's comments at the end. He thought he had them all figured out. Compliments are due. You, sir, are a writer.
Great story, never thought I would read all 29 but I did. You kept it fresh thanks
I can not believe I came for a quick read and now find my self in a small post-book depression. That does NOT usually happen on here.
Normally, when reading such works, it affords me less mental energy to substitute my images of the characters with people or faces I have seen before. It's the same with places. The "house of the family" usually looks the same to me in all stories, and the dorm room, and the university, and the mall...
Incredibly, your story is (after what, 15 years of reading these things online?) the first one in memory that did not allow those substitutions. The characters stood on their own and HAD to stand on their own. Impossible to project onto them any real-life approximations. I felt the same about the locations.
I had a great sense of exploration when reading this story, not just because the locations were "new". Topics of consent, the frameworks we all devise to get us through situations we are ill-equipped to deal with, relationships, perspectives, communication, and conflicting desires. All are topics which have captured, in my mind, a bit of illumination through this story. Nothing radical, but valuable still, and in the context of where I attained them, surprising.
All of that doesn't even begin to speak of how much I just enjoyed reading about these characters. I will miss them.
To say that this story has "changed my life" would probably be wrong and would definitely be melodramatic, so, to use a metaphor that Kent might enjoy, and because I fail to find a good way to show my appreciation:
The timeline I find myself on, though maybe drawn parallel to the one where I did not read this story, is filled with more joy than its alternative. Thank you for that.
You are a natural born writer. The subtle references across subject matter was a delight, for those who appreciate good intellect. I read a chapter of fifty shades but the writing was so poor the book would not stay open for more. This offering kept me turning pages.
Coming from a "reader", this story has been the most fun I've had in a long time. Call me a hopeless romantic, but Bai's snarky, teasing comments about his lingering inspections and groping, and then, later, her care for getting Kent off were my favorite parts. Her first kiss on his penis was one of the sexiest things ever put to paper. Thank you, thank you for writing this masterpiece. Bravo X!!!!