- Lesbian Sex
- Unlikely Love Pt. 06
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All Comments on 'Unlikely Love Pt. 06'
by christa_p
- 45 Comments
A wonderful story - I absolutely adore the way you built and resolved the tension. A well earned five stars!!
Love and kisses
Anna
xxxx
For someone who “just has a thought or two now and then..” you crafted a superbly erotic love story - poignant, intense, well paced, beautifully written. So enjoyed your characters and the storyline. Already rereading first few chapters to enjoy again how you brought to this end. Can only now hope that you will have a few more thoughts to share from your vivid imagination. Thanks.
Whoa that sex scene, right from that kiss under the mistletoe. It was so good, so erotic! Often the narration of attraction/seduction between straight and lesbian women in stories feel too much imposed upon. There is often a tendency to compensate the lack of attraction with domination. I believe domination only work if there is already a degree of palpable attraction. But this didn't feel that way. There was hesitance and eventual acceptance, but with a pace that felt natural.
I also enjoy the dissonance between the two perspectives immensely. How they remember things said or done a little differently from each other. I think that's what happens in real life as well. No two of us remember events exactly the same. At first I thought this must be a group of two authors, writing two different povs. But the author profile suggested otherwise. This only indicates how talented the author is. So my kudos for that.
Enjoyable story! Well written with the back and forth point of view. Was like getting two for the price of one. Hope to see more from you. Definitely five stars!!
SB
A wonderful tale of how love can overcome just about anything. Just beautiful! Five stars all around.
This chapter, brings the entire series to a crescendo. From the moment Tamara arrives back at Elena’s home to the incredible tribbing scene at the end. Why does Ravel’s Bolero come to mind?
Also when Tamara tells her version of their first time love making I couldn’t help but have a sense of Annag98’s A Meeting of Minds. It had that timeless romance feel to it.
Am I making any sense at this point or is it just me being up past my bedtime again?
Regardless, Lottsa stars. This is a great story extremely well told. Thank you!
Great , great story. So sorry its come to an end but thanks so much for all the pleasure you've given us. Hope you'll write again soon.
I had a really good time with your story. I must admit that I'm still not sure how I feel about the same narration being repeated by both characters, but in the end I enjoyed it, so that's all that co-unts.
...it happened but I read the first chapter of Unlikely Love, gave you five stars, and then completely overlooked the remainder of the story. Still, I've found it now, read the whole lot in one go and very pleased that I've done so. It is a very well-written and enjoyable story and I hope that in time we'll see a lot more from you, Christa.
I am of the male species, have thoroughly enjoyed your writings. I would like nothing more than to have a threesome with two bisexual ladies. It would be a “Feast” of great respect for each other.
Kind regards. Nigel UK
Very fine work. I really like your grasp of use of language and do a wonderful job of accurately describing emotion and passion. Just love your work.
Finally, nothing like two beautiful women gracing each other's presence with a love that developed through respect for one another by maintaining their friendship allowing their passion for each other to develop over time, which a reader like me grew very impatient but the end result is truly heart warming. Good Job christa_p.
What an amazing story. Truly a five star story, so well written with so much passion. You can really feel with both girls and how they experience their developing relationship and love. Writing in both perspectives was a little confusing in the beginning but in the end is refreshing. Hope to be able to read more of your stories. Please continue
Absolutely superb in every way. The plotting, characterization, dialogue, reality of the sex scenes, none of it can be beat. More please...
Loved this story - I much prefer this kind of build up, which gives the reader time to get to know the characters, (Which inspired my writing), and you showed a great level of skill at it. Beautiful, thank you!
Great story. never really occurred to me on the intricacies and difficulties inherent in any gay relationship and the number of narrow minded bigots and homophobes that can mar a truly good relationship. Particularly so called friends, relatives and colleagues. sad.
S9808-Change is not easy. Not saying that their actions are justified but if you are going to be the moral compass then accept that not everyone thinks the same.
This was such a great series! I thought the double perspective was very effective — especially this episode where we got double the delicious sex!
WOW...Just Wow, I absolutely love this story. Thank you for writing it & entertaining us with these beautiful ladies.❤️
A lovely sexual story..mutually fulfilling for a lesbian lover and her new found partner…in love.
Very satisfying
Thanks for this lesbian breakthrough…
Great build-up and nice plotting --a hot story!
As a constructive criticism, the one and then the other telling EXACTLY the same story got burdensome. That plotting trick only really works if you get different insights from each. I thought these two just parroted each other too closely, so wading through the nearly identical script a second time got to be a hard slog....just imo.
6 chapters of Lesbian Sex cures "hetero trauma" didn't see that coming. NOT. How about get some help. Find inner strength and then seek a partner to share life's ups and downs. Otherwise it's just a a partnership based on dependence.
You are intensely effective in crafting a tale that flows and keeps the reader emotionally involved in your story. At least that’s the way it was for me.
As far as letting us see the story unfold by giving us the two different perspectives, sometimes it worked for me. But when they seemed to be repeating just about the same thing…as far as I’m concerned, that made your wonderful story drag…but only a bit.
Lesbian sex isn’t my first go-to when I’m searching out erotic literature, but with your very good writing style…you just might find me giving you my comments and opinions on another one ☀️
You write very well and tell a great story, so good that the two perspectives were fine for me though I can see why some found that a bit repetitive. Please keep going and honing your considerable talent I for one am a very grateful to be a beneficiary.
I must say, one of the most amazing stories / series I have read in a while. You drew me in from the beginning. The friendship, kindred spirit, love which grew and was lost but then later found was the pinnacle of life. Bravo! Bravo!
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Wow, what an awesome piece of work — art even. I rarely feel so strongly immersed; one of the best stories I ever read. Thanx so much!
this was a great story, i had trouble keeping my mind from wandering when i had to quit reading. it kept drawing me back into this amazing tale. i dont like the she said, she said back and forth parts, but thats just me. i didnt comment on the other chapters and feel bad about that, as it deserved a comment as to how good it was all the way thru. you are a talented author, and yes, i will read more. solid four stars.
I felt every emotion, I envisioned every touch! Christa thank you for an amazing read. muah
I beautiful love story. We appreciate you sharing your writing skills with us. Your stories draw us in and keep us interested like no other and leave us feeling happy that all can be right with this crazy f'd up world that we live in.
Thank you for this very well written very erotic story. I enjoyed reading the whole series !
Great, well written love story. Absolutely loved every reading minute and their love adventure. Keep writing.