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- Virginity Sale
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All Comments on 'Virginity Sale'
by KeithD
- 10 Comments
Very well written, your descriptions really set the mood. Would like to read a longer version of this to get more character detail. Why did Ben allow himself to be used like this by Ron? Was it love, lust, or some other reason? We all think that we'll lose our virginity to that special someone. From what I've heard, it seldom happens that way. In my case, it was a stranger I met after the bars closed. Not complaining though, he literally gave me an out of body experience. And just like that, my virginity was gone and after he climaxed, so was he. This was a great short story, took me back. Thanks
Hot story. Easy read and satisfying. Would like to be any or-all the characters. For 750 words, well written. Interesting to know if this will be developed into other stories. Thanks KeithD.
I have wanted to do this, but could never find guys willing to pay. Nice story
Meh. Didn't work for me. Maybe it was just cramming a plot that needed more words to develop into the 750 word limit, but no
I managed/willed /wittingly/unwittingly/chickened out /delayed the taking of my virginity for far longer than it should have been. Had a lot of sexuality encounters but was frankly too scared to let the ultimate to happen. And when it did? I was strapped into a sling and ridden pretty hard by a longer & thicker than average cock belonging to a sandy /ginger biker who got me cuming 3 times in quick succession without once touching my ridged cock. Afterwards I kicked myself - for delaying so long! Made sure I made up for lost time though,and still am!
Given the word limit, starting the story mid-fuck was a good call. The quick exposition dump in the first paragraph gave me all the info I needed for the characters to make for a hot story.
There is no horny turn on in the world like the feeling of a hard cock slipping up your opened up and sloppy hole after another guy has already pumped a load inside you.