All Comments on 'When Twins Go Bad!'

Very descriptive, and hot! Would have liked it if Becky had spanked the girls, turning the person who was supposed to save them into another authority they had to obey, but that is just me, and doesn't imply there was anything wrong with the story. Like most stories in this category, pure fantasy, and hot enough to keep me interested.

Good work! (gave it 5 stars)

Very good read and hot as hell, I do think the girls should have got the chance to eat their mother out after daddy fucked her so they could have a taste of cum for the first time as well.

Adding the girlfriend to the mix was a nice touch with mom eating her out while she sucked dads cock.

Next time let the girls see how it is to be filled with cum.

So hot!!

There is no doubt that this was a good story. But I could not give it five stars because of the bad grammar.

Can't wait for the pajama party. Mom sure has a kinky mind and I love it.

I thought it a bit squeamish that DAD was a step parent in an incest story. The explanation for how that all came to be was weak and not at all realistic. That said, this was HOT. This was the product of a filthy imagunation to be sure, but one afraid to make that final leap into Hell. Three stars with the grammer problems.

So very hot. In those pajama parties maybe all of the women get spanked! Or maybe Betty and Cheryl get to spank the twins as well. Or both!

Just couldn't get there. Some of the descriptions were really hot, but what's next? They start a meth lab? Corrupt the cops to join them? Start a gang? Rob a bank? I guess a brothel would be most logical next step. But going to college and doing well? I don't think so!

I didn't have a problem with the weak "how I got to be stepdad" story, hell its just a quick and dirty plot tool so we can get to the meat of the entertainment! ;). Basically it was just a fun story so we can all have sex with some fun spanking thrown in for a multiplier, hehehe. Not like it was intended to mirror any real reality ;)

.. A part two could be fun though!

I enjoyed that very much

Brilliant story

Now I want a follow up

But loads of fun! :~)

Loved reading all the incest stories. You write very well with very few grammatical errors. Would love to read more stories from you, especially, mother son stories.