All Comments on 'Who Knew?'

A Guitar Player gets shot. Does he look to his wound? No...he first checks his Guitar for damage. Okay ~ this story is true-to-life if nothing else. Guitarist have a crazy affection for tneir guitar so this is a very authentic reaction for a guitar player. Enjoyable Story! Good Read!

Interesting love story. Very enjoyable.

I like how it begins, in medias res as they say, and the end is sweet, though the whole thing stops a bit short for my taste. Good job though, very well written. Best, Ken

rock music and sex....my 2 great loves hehe, thanks for this story, I enjoyed it :)

I really liked this story just as I really liked all of your stories about Paul and James. I gotta ask, though, isn't there some way to connect them all together? Except for the fact that they're about the same two people, the stories seem rather disjointed. The only exception is A Command Performance and its sequel Command Performance, the Next Day. By the way, I found that story very interesting and I look forward to reading the continuation when you have the chance to write it. Thanks for sharing your amazing writing! I for one am very grateful.

I was sad to see it was the end when the title's words came up. I'd have liked to see a story about them and where they ended up. Did he fall in love with Paul? I'd like to see you continue it.

I've tried a few of your stories and I don't think you know what love is, or what it's like to make love - your sex all comes across as rape.

should have shot the writer