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GET AN EDITOR!!
Kept losing track of what you were intending to say because you kept either miss-spelling words or just using wrong words for the context!
I guess those who 'favorited' it must have a poor and uncritical reading ability!!
I must agree
I agree with what anon said. It seemed like a rough draft.
Maybe better next time.
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Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...
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