by WritingwhatIlike
Extremely well written tale with love, lust and sex thrown in. The sex scenes are so well written that I felt that I was watching Becca, Carol and Andy engage in loving sex among them
Lovely, wholesome, warm, relatable. An absolutely fabulous read and great conclusion.
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Loved this series! So glad it finally worked out for Becca! Five stars and a favorite point!
So very glad the Lit admin's fit of utter madness didn't succeed in permanently driving you away. Such a lovely story! Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Truly masterful! You handled Becca's phobia delicately but with accuracy. Kudo's to you. I am in awe of your talent!!
Only thing I wish you would have added would have been Becca returning the favor to Carol and her talking about her 1st post eating.
Overall a good story, however the belief that sex has to be gentle when pregnant is ridiculous, if a woman is growing and pushing a football out of her pussy, I think she can handle a little "rough" sex. Regardless of Becca's sex issues, she comes off as a pushy bitch with few if any redeeming qualities in this story.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! It was sexy enough throughout, while also having some relationship arcs on its way to a satisfying conclusion. There were definitely some turns I wasn't expecting, often to pleasing results.
Personally, I would have enjoyed more sex during the pregnancy (the story was more Becca-focused at that point), and some anal, too (hinted at but never delivered on), but it wasn't my story to tell. What was contained in this story was very enjoyable and arousing. Thank you for sharing it, and I plan to read more of your work because of it.
Great writing and I enjoyed the storyline. I felt that encounters with Doug in BC were unnecessary
Loved the ratcheting up between mom and son. But what the heck? She didn't raise him right if he was naive and stupid enough to marry a girl like Becca. But, I guess he really did love her, and thanks to his mom, who made it all happen for them. Nice to see it worked out for all of them.
Part 1 & 2 was really great, but part 3 is boring af with becca and all and you leave out anal his mom offered him in part 2! what a pity 2/5.
Aargh, religions and their backward practices.
I remember my eldest sister telling me our mother told her she didn't need to enjoy but it was her duty - so very sad. Took me years to get my sister to simply cuddle.
Anyway, loved the story, well done.