I live and work in the UK, so spelling, etc, will be English rather than American.
This is my first work; constructive comments are welcome and appreciated.
Update - Chapter 17 is now submitted! Please vote and comment so I know how each chapter is received. Chapters 18 and 19 are planned in my noggin and I will get them out as soon as I can transfer them via my fingers to the keyboard.
location
SW England