Having received favorable comments and a number of helpful ideas (thank you), I am working on further chapters of "A Game for Learning about Yourself." It might take a while before further chapters are up though.
Thanks to all those who made comments on the first chapters of Wild West. I do not agree with all of them but will keep all of them in mind. I will say that the problem with anonymous comments is that I can't look at what you think would be better because I cannot read stories you wrote or that you liked. Still, any constructive comments are welcome. As for what is credible and what is not, this involves ones whole view of the world.
In any event, I think Wild West will have about nine chapters but they may come slowly.
18.6.23 I have submitted Chapter 4 to Wild Wild West. Thanks to Avicia for proofreading. The comma has always been a mystery to me.
I have not entirely decided whether to go further with Wild and if I write more, it might be a while for Chapter 5.
27.9.23 - I turned off allowing unidentified feedback for a while because I think that much of it is annoying and one ought to be willing to at least give a Literotica name. But I decided to allow it again.
Meanwhile, there are few more chapters of Wild West to go and thanks again to Avicia who has continued to help on punctuation.
14.4.24 - Thanks to those who praised my work. Maybe I'm shallow, but I need the praise. I don't think I will write here again for a while, though, maybe not again. I don't know if the world needs another dystopia submissive sex story. But then I have thought of retiring from Literotica a few times before but come back.
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