Discovered your work through reading another author; glad for that. Very moving, thought provoking erotic poem. Loved the “turn” and the complementary nature of your lines around strengths and weaknesses. Beautiful poem.

Liked the title — perfect for the mix of metaphorical images you create. Any number of lines so captivating “…like twisted sea dreads…”. Last two stanzas put smile on one’s face. Not sure why FUCK is capitalized — curious; certainly does not detract. Like your poetry.

Lovely.

“caressed and kissed“
I love it.

I like the air of submission in this poem.

Wow! I love the ocean theme. Beautiful sex.

such vivid imagery . beautiful.

So erotic xxx

You're writing is still incredible

Thank you I did write one the other day care to here it?

Thank you Satyr61. A friday evening rambling :) Glad you liked.

What a truly beautiful poem, Kat. It touched my heart xxxxx

B reakin' on CNN!!!?
D onald got Spanked....
S tormy testified Prez Trump:
M ama roasted his Red Rump!?

-- I had to re-read that line, too. I took it as meaning, "She says things to me, about myself, that make me think 'how can she possibly know that?' She knows things about me I didn't even know myself."

Thank you 💋 🔥