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Click hereI like it, but you can do much better. Practice, practice and grow.
Dr.Bert7319
Very nice. Your work demonstrates you have a good grasp of the male and female figures.
The lines are good, but could be better defined. Keep working; you have promise.
Pretty good buuuut... WHERE'S. THE.HEAD?! no offence but i think its kind of kreepy w/o a head. keep posting! :)
it's beautiful. you're great. i love it without the head, but i would soften the tonal changes & clean up your edges