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Click hereIt seems the water may not be so hard to draw because
her breasts are orange-halves
round, firm, alive.
She pushes them through the air as she twists.
It seems the water may not be so hard to draw because
her feet tickle me most, and is that not human?
to be pretty? silly? sensual?
Sliding in and out of open-toed sandals...
the water it draws is the desire that is drawn
from the well inside
the water it draws is a narcotic that speaks
and begs for her to peel herself
and share.
- COMMENTS
I agree with annswirls, a beautiful and unique use of language. Please keep writing.
Thanx, BD
What a nice way to start. Welcome to literotica. I enjoyed the poem and will look for your others as they come along.
I Would not call this a little poem, it has a strong presence. New twists on language (grrr I hate that I Cannot go see the poem while typing this!) Keep writing, please, I enjoyed this...welcome, I got the link from your Roll Call post!