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- Approaching old age
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Click hereCracking joints;
a chrysalis opens.
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Congratulations on the E, m'dear.
My version would be:
Cracking joint.
My orthopedist opens
his checkbook.
Yup you deserved it!
in just a few words you told a story that is also a metaphor. Excellent! :-)
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