- Erotic Poetry
- As You Do
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Click hereWhen we're bitter we get bitter,
and your rosy posy nosy flickers
moth-quiet, while you inspire
from your doll-pink-toes and sigh
to your girl-pink-lips,
And you get so mad you do,
you could toss me in your knickers,
or tip me in the crick that's barely there,
But you're so good,
you'd dredge me up
and help me shiver warm,
and as sweetly as you do,
-as you do.
ii.
It was in a tryst
where I found my lost Eucharist,
and I knew of no religion
without worship wasted,
-'til she'd placed her tongue
between my heretical lips
- COMMENTS
The wordplay is natural and really good. Keep writing and submitting--we need new voices like yours here. :)
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I like your style in this poem as well the other poem you posted with the same clever word play and lyrical sort of quality. I especially liked, "shiver warm"--it's a very visceral description. Nice work, thanks.