- Illustrated Poetry
- Bee's Knees
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This is it
the shit
it's the bee's knees, baby
the real thing
once and for all
a reason to wing
to have a hell of a ball
to break out laughing
in a lapping loving
lung life lips luscious
gracious groovefest
Glittering
so gorgeous
you're the knee's bees, baby
one of an age
a gazillion of reason
to overload my mind
and celebrate the season
with the queen of the vibe
a shining sexy supergirl
the way you swirl
soar sing strip swing
smooth sultry slender
lick my soul so whole
to sweet surrender
This is it
the better way
we're the bnee's kees, baby
bouncing boldly
purring precious
growing brave to braver
delirious delicious
a flimsy flunky flavour
to suck up suck in
and savour the splendor
a raunchy roller-coaster
crazy careful tender
- COMMENTS
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Alliteration overload and I like the way you show so subtly the intoxication progression of the night.
If the rest of the lady pictured looks as beautiful as her legs ~ I'd say she really is the bee's knees ~ and one hell of a groovy chick.
Wow, it punched me, I love it! The whole thing is perfect, I especially appreciated the odd twist on words and the catchy, jazzy rythm. Lick my lips!
I would lose that word. You don't need it and I think it detracts from the overall joy of the poem. - I am a sucker for alliteration by the way.
Vibrant ~ a great read but that HAS to be a typo in the last verse. If not, I don't get it. :-D